Improve %description text for PostgreSQL.

postgresql.spec

@@ -146,22 +146,14 @@ Requires: %{name}-libs%{?_isa} = %{version}-%{release}
 Buildroot: %{_tmppath}/%{name}-%{version}-%{release}-root
 
 %description
-PostgreSQL is an advanced Object-Relational database management system
+PostgreSQL is an advanced Object-Relational database management system (DBMS).
-(DBMS) that supports almost all SQL constructs (including
+The base postgresql package contains the client programs that you'll need to
-transactions, sub-selects and user-defined types and functions). The
+access a PostgreSQL DBMS server, as well as HTML documentation for the whole
-postgresql package includes the client programs and libraries that
+system.  These client programs can be located on the same machine as the
-you'll need to access a PostgreSQL DBMS server.  These PostgreSQL
+PostgreSQL server, or on a remote machine that accesses a PostgreSQL server
-client programs are programs that directly manipulate the internal
+over a network connection.  The PostgreSQL server can be found in the
-structure of PostgreSQL databases on a PostgreSQL server. These client
+postgresql-server sub-package.
-programs can be located on the same machine with the PostgreSQL
-server, or may be on a remote machine which accesses a PostgreSQL
-server over a network connection. This package contains the docs
-in HTML for the whole package, as well as command-line utilities for
-managing PostgreSQL databases on a PostgreSQL server. 
 
-If you want to manipulate a PostgreSQL database on a local or remote PostgreSQL
-server, you need this package. You also need to install this package
-if you're installing the postgresql-server package.
 
 %package libs
 Summary: The shared libraries required for any PostgreSQL clients
@@ -177,6 +169,7 @@ PostgreSQL client program or interface. You will need to install this package
 to use any other PostgreSQL package or any clients that need to connect to a
 PostgreSQL server.
 
+
 %package server
 Summary: The programs needed to create and run a PostgreSQL server
 Group: Applications/Databases
@@ -197,15 +190,10 @@ Requires(post): systemd-sysv
 Requires(post): chkconfig
 
 %description server
-The postgresql-server package includes the programs needed to create
+PostgreSQL is an advanced Object-Relational database management system (DBMS).
+The postgresql-server package contains the programs needed to create
 and run a PostgreSQL server, which will in turn allow you to create
-and maintain PostgreSQL databases.  PostgreSQL is an advanced
+and maintain PostgreSQL databases.
-Object-Relational database management system (DBMS) that supports
-almost all SQL constructs (including transactions, sub-selects and
-user-defined types and functions). You should install
-postgresql-server if you want to create and maintain your own
-PostgreSQL databases and/or your own PostgreSQL server. You also need
-to install the postgresql package.
 
 
 %package docs
@@ -214,19 +202,19 @@ Group: Applications/Databases
 Requires: %{name}%{?_isa} = %{version}-%{release}
 
 %description docs
-The postgresql-docs package includes some additional documentation for
+The postgresql-docs package contains some additional documentation for
 PostgreSQL.  Currently, this includes the main documentation in PDF format
 and source files for the PostgreSQL tutorial.
 
 
 %package contrib
-Summary: Contributed modules distributed with PostgreSQL
+Summary: Extension modules distributed with PostgreSQL
 Group: Applications/Databases
 Requires: %{name}%{?_isa} = %{version}-%{release}
 Requires: %{name}-libs%{?_isa} = %{version}-%{release}
 
 %description contrib
-The postgresql-contrib package contains contributed packages that are
+The postgresql-contrib package contains various extension modules that are
 included in the PostgreSQL distribution.
 
 
@@ -239,9 +227,9 @@ Requires: %{name}-libs%{?_isa} = %{version}-%{release}
 %description devel
 The postgresql-devel package contains the header files and libraries
 needed to compile C or C++ applications which will directly interact
-with a PostgreSQL database management server and the ecpg Embedded C
+with a PostgreSQL database management server.  It also contains the ecpg
-Postgres preprocessor. You need to install this package if you want to
+Embedded C Postgres preprocessor. You need to install this package if you want
-develop applications which will interact with a PostgreSQL server.
+to develop applications which will interact with a PostgreSQL server.
 
 
 %if %upgrade
@@ -252,10 +240,9 @@ Requires: %{name}-server%{?_isa} = %{version}-%{release}
 Requires: %{name}-libs%{?_isa} = %{version}-%{release}
 
 %description upgrade
-PostgreSQL is an advanced Object-Relational database management
+The postgresql-upgrade package contains the pg_upgrade utility and supporting
-system. The postgresql-upgrade package includes the pg_upgrade utility
+files needed for upgrading a PostgreSQL database from the previous major
-and supporting files needed for upgrading a database from the previous
+version of PostgreSQL.
-major version of PostgreSQL.
 %endif
 
 
@@ -267,9 +254,9 @@ Requires: %{name}-server%{?_isa} = %{version}-%{release}
 Requires: perl(:MODULE_COMPAT_%(eval "`%{__perl} -V:version`"; echo $version))
 
 %description plperl
-PostgreSQL is an advanced Object-Relational database management
+The postgresql-plperl package contains the PL/Perl procedural language,
-system.  The postgresql-plperl package contains the PL/Perl
+which is an extension to the PostgreSQL database server.
-procedural language for the backend.
+Install this if you want to write database functions in Perl.
 %endif
 
 %if %plpython
@@ -279,9 +266,9 @@ Group: Applications/Databases
 Requires: %{name}-server%{?_isa} = %{version}-%{release}
 
 %description plpython
-PostgreSQL is an advanced Object-Relational database management
+The postgresql-plpython package contains the PL/Python procedural language,
-system.  The postgresql-plpython package contains the PL/Python
+which is an extension to the PostgreSQL database server.
-procedural language for the backend.
+Install this if you want to write database functions in Python.
 %endif
 
 %if %pltcl
@@ -291,9 +278,9 @@ Group: Applications/Databases
 Requires: %{name}-server%{?_isa} = %{version}-%{release}
 
 %description pltcl
-PostgreSQL is an advanced Object-Relational database management
+The postgresql-plptcl package contains the PL/Tcl procedural language,
-system.  The postgresql-pltcl package contains the PL/Tcl
+which is an extension to the PostgreSQL database server.
-procedural language for the backend.
+Install this if you want to write database functions in Tcl.
 %endif
 
 %if %test
@@ -304,10 +291,9 @@ Requires: %{name}-server%{?_isa} = %{version}-%{release}
 Requires: %{name}-devel%{?_isa} = %{version}-%{release}
 
 %description test
-PostgreSQL is an advanced Object-Relational database management
+The postgresql-test package contains files needed for various tests for the
-system. The postgresql-test package includes the sources and pre-built
+PostgreSQL database management system, including regression tests and
-binaries of various tests for the PostgreSQL database management
+benchmarks.
-system, including regression tests and benchmarks.
 %endif
 
 %prep