fcoe-utils/fcoe-utils-1.0.25-doc-Make-s-stats-description-more-readable.patch
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From 3cb7cf3e6f756e15377f7512ba0dc27c10063935 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Robert Love <robert.w.love@intel.com>
Date: Thu, 4 Oct 2012 03:17:23 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 1/7] doc: Make '-s|--stats' description more readable
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This patch improves the language in the fcoeadm
man page for the '-s|--stats' option to make it more
readable.
Signed-off-by: Robert Love <robert.w.love@intel.com>
Tested-by: Ross Brattain <ross.b.brattain@intel.com>
Signed-off-by: Petr Šabata <contyk@redhat.com>
---
doc/fcoeadm.8 | 12 +++++++-----
doc/fcoeadm.txt | 12 ++++++------
2 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
diff --git a/doc/fcoeadm.8 b/doc/fcoeadm.8
index 2a696b3..6dd6d9b 100644
--- a/doc/fcoeadm.8
+++ b/doc/fcoeadm.8
@@ -2,12 +2,12 @@
.\" Title: fcoeadm
.\" Author: [FIXME: author] [see http://docbook.sf.net/el/author]
.\" Generator: DocBook XSL Stylesheets v1.76.1 <http://docbook.sf.net/>
-.\" Date: 01/30/2012
+.\" Date: 07/20/2012
.\" Manual: Open-FCoE Tools
.\" Source: Open-FCoE
.\" Language: English
.\"
-.TH "FCOEADM" "8" "01/30/2012" "Open\-FCoE" "Open\-FCoE Tools"
+.TH "FCOEADM" "8" "07/20/2012" "Open\-FCoE" "Open\-FCoE Tools"
.\" -----------------------------------------------------------------
.\" * Define some portability stuff
.\" -----------------------------------------------------------------
@@ -102,11 +102,13 @@ Show detailed information about the discovered SCSI LUNs associated with the FCo
.PP
\fB\-s\fR, \fB\-\-stats\fR \fIethX\fR [\fIinterval\fR]
.RS 4
-Show the statistics (including FC4 statistics) of the FCoE interface on the specified network interface\&. The information will be display in one line on the screen per given time interval\&.
+Show the statistics (including FC4 statistics) of the FCoE connection on the specified network interface\&. The information will be displayed repeatedly until the user cancels the command\&. The statistics will be printed every specified
\fIinterval\fR
-should be specified in whole integers greater than 0\&. It specifies the time interval in the unit of seconds\&. If
+(in seconds)\&.
+\fIinterval\fR
+should be specified as a whole number greater than 0\&. If
\fIinterval\fR
-is not specified, the default interval is one second\&.
+is not specified, a default interval of one second is used\&.
.RE
.PP
\fB\-b\fR, \fB\-\-lesb\fR \fIethX\fR [\fIinterval\fR]
diff --git a/doc/fcoeadm.txt b/doc/fcoeadm.txt
index 4069978..40348ab 100644
--- a/doc/fcoeadm.txt
+++ b/doc/fcoeadm.txt
@@ -100,12 +100,12 @@ OPTIONS
*-s*, *--stats* _ethX_ [_interval_]::
Show the statistics (including FC4 statistics) of the FCoE
- interface on the specified network interface.
- The information will be display in one line on the screen per given
- time interval. _interval_ should be specified in whole integers
- greater than 0. It specifies the time interval in the unit of
- seconds. If _interval_ is not specified, the default interval is
- one second.
+ connection on the specified network interface. The information will
+ be displayed repeatedly until the user cancels the command. The
+ statistics will be printed every specified _interval_ (in seconds).
+ _interval_ should be specified as a whole number greater than 0.
+ If _interval_ is not specified, a default interval of one second is
+ used.
*-b*, *--lesb* _ethX_ [_interval_]::
Show the Link Error Statistics Block (LESB) of the FCoE connection
--
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